For this crit I took my responses of the only two briefs I've started so far; Stuff-O-Meter and Salvedge logo.
This crit came at a good time for the Stuff-O-Meter brief, because I just needed a little help and a little push in the right direction. I've had enough of this brief now, it's gone on far too long, so the plan now is to get it done within the next two days and 'put it to bed' as they say.
But with the Salvedge logo there wasn't much feedback I could ask for as Kyle and I have sent off a PDF to Steve and we're meeting him this evening to discuss what he thinks to our initial ideas, but it was good to hear what people thought.
Stuff-O-Meter Feedback:
So during the crit I put up all the ideas I've had for the website ideas, a few of the posters I constructed and a little mail shot I put together yesterday. I explained where I was at, what I'd done and where I intend to go, but needed some response to some questions just to help me get moving...
The questions and answers were as follows..
C+N-Claire + Nicky
J+K-Jimmy + Ken
1. Which of the website layouts I've been looking at would be the most appropriate?
C+N - Number 4, the simplest and Number 8, the flow chart idea. But with this one get rid of the black wire squiggle in the corner.


J+K - How do we judge? See next questions for a response to this aswell...
2. Should I keep the amount of information I provide on the website as simple as possible? So that I'm not bombarding people with all the un-interesting, geeky information I found out? For example, just listing the materials inside, providing an idea of how many miles the hair dryer and it's components might have travelled before it reaches the UK? etc.
C+N - Stick with quirky facts. Nothing boring. Travel information would be interesting.
J+K - No, keep it the more interesting stuff, but make it quirky. The geekier the better. D&AD about creativity. Just making it an ad campaign, like Diesel perfume and the cowboy thing?
3. Am I taking too much on? Am I on the right track or do I need to clarify where I'm taking this?
C+N - Wrap it up. GET IT FINISHED! A blog might be easier?
J+K - No, just make quick decisions!
4. What's missing from the promotional poster and the leaflet designs to encourage people to go to the site?
C+N - It gives too much away (the poster), less is more. Pink one, do teasers, each poster with a different component. A series.
J+K - Use vector shapes as subjects to relate the life and physical aspect of a hair dryer.
5. What do you think my next step SHOULD be?
C+N - Finish it by Friday.
J+K - Make the poster brighter. Look at GHD, give it a purpose. Promote their hair dryer (a new path). Does it need to die? USe life and death as a theme.
Other general notes..
The lifetime map is the strongest piece visually.
Seeing as it links with London Underground Maps, and the type has a look at 1930s, maybe look at this style of design Stylise it using colour.
What I think...
Overall really useful feedback. I know what they mean about it needing to be over and done with. So I'm going to set myself a deadline of two days time. I'm going to focus on the website and how that's going to be constructed before I take into consideration the poster and mail shot. I might have a think about what Ken and Jimmy said about promoting a product, as I think that would work better, but it means taking a few little steps back and considering how I might do that. But I've had enough now, so I might see how it goes before I make any other decisions.